Monday 23 January 2012

Journal: 23/01/12

In todays lesson we screened our music video for the first time. 
We had six different groups observing the video and giving us feedback; all six groups said the video definitely had potential. Here are some of the main points of feedback we received: 
The elements that work:
  • Good editing
  • Good effects - could add more!
  • The dancing
  • Nice shoes and props
  • Lips
  • Animations
  • Split screens
  • Good make up
  • Split screens when getting ready
  • The ballet dancing
Elements that need developing:
  • Bit too short
  • Clearer cuts
  • Some shots are too long
  • Writing on the mirror
  • More split screens
  • Clothing on bed sequence repeated once too many

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