We had six different groups observing the video and giving us feedback; all six groups said the video definitely had potential. Here are some of the main points of feedback we received:
The elements that work:
- Good editing
- Good effects - could add more!
- The dancing
- Nice shoes and props
- Lips
- Animations
- Split screens
- Good make up
- Split screens when getting ready
- The ballet dancing
Elements that need developing:
- Bit too short
- Clearer cuts
- Some shots are too long
- Writing on the mirror
- More split screens
- Clothing on bed sequence repeated once too many
